POET'S CORNER

[Prissy]

Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #64 on: December 03, 2005, 07:07:18 PM »
pointless school girl crush

so much hurt in those eyes
So much love too...

I can't choose.
Which one is pulling me in,
both have great strength
but which one has the most I do not know

growing closer and closer to you
Is this somethin that I really choose?
Do you have control over me
I think, yes you do

I'm falling harder
falling deeper
Is this love or hate
I'm smiling brighter with happiness
or is this an expression of fear?

I cry and cry over again
For others do not see
for this is inside
Deep down where these feelings hide.

These feeling must stay hidden
every laugh must be covered
every look must not be caught
no trail of clues left behind

For this is not excepted to continue on,
A school girl crush!
That which should never be known
For it holds no future...

Kimmy (claytonsmyccf)

[Prissy]

Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #65 on: December 03, 2005, 07:13:02 PM »
another one just had to type it up

Poem told through the eyes of someone who has experienced a moment at a concert like this. If you have then it will make sense to you.

A gift to you
I stood there watching,
Not a thing to say,
You crying up there,
Us showing you we care.

Sweet Voice sudenly cracks,
Beautiful song isn't wrecked,
Whispers pass around,
He's beautiful even now.

No one want to go,
For we managed to touch somethin,
Somethin deep down inside,
Somethin that can't be done again!

Kimmy (claytonsmyccf)

[Prissy]

Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #68 on: January 27, 2006, 05:00:49 PM »
Wow... No one has posted anything for awhile! I have two poems that I found scribbled on the back of some Spanish notes and hope you guys enjoy them   

Post-Thanksgiving Blues

I'm so full of turkey, I'm going to burst
It's freezing outside ('tis scarf season again)
To make matters worse
I'm sitting in a desk that is brown
And confines me to work
That makes me frown
But, I have you to think of
My darling Clay
You never fail to brighten my day

Comments: I wrote this one the day I got back to school from Thanksgiving vacation. I was bored to death in Spanish and decided to express how I was feeling at the moment and to try rhyming for once. I like my free-verse poems better.

Untitled

I'm always imagining
What it would be like
If I could hold you close
And make everthing alright
I wish I could be your angel
Who takes away the pain

Comments: This is another free-verse, romantic poem like I usually write. It's inspired by an Aerosmith song that goes "Baby you're my angel/Come and save me tonight/ You're my angel/Come and make it alright..." I want to be the person who "makes it alright" for this guy that I'm in love with.

Yukino

[Prissy]

Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #70 on: February 02, 2006, 03:59:16 PM »
Have another one

haha mostly the problems with love and how sometimes love no matter what can't be.  Seems to be a trend with my life poems lately.


Just Mine...

I'm sick of myself for hating her,
I'm tired of wanting to cry when I see her with you,
I'm scared of her loving you,
I'm scared of you loving her FOR REAL!

I'm scared of her changing you,
I'm scared of you changing for her,
I'm scared of you being hers,
I'm jealous just thinking of her holding YOU!

I don't want to hate her 'cause its stupid,
I don't want to cry 'cause I'm stupid,
I don't want to think about IT,
I just wanna stay in this world of mine where you'll always be,
JUST MINE....

Kimmy (claytonsmyccf)

[Prissy]

Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #74 on: February 17, 2006, 07:42:48 PM »
Greetings Fellow Poets!

    I have another poem for ya'll-enjoy! 


The thought of counting the freckles on your face
Causes my mouth to curve into a grin
And my thoughts to wander through outer space
Looking into your eyes must be a sin
For they are seemingly endless pools of verdant
Your full, shell-pink lips are so kissable
I certainly wouldn’t be nonchalant
If my own got to make contact with them
That, I’m afraid, is not permissible
Because you are unaware that I exist
I am just another fan letter to you
Some teeny-bopper that won’t cease to persist
But, I hope someday, my wish shall come true
And you’ll have knowledge of my love for you

Comments: This is a sonnet I had to do for English class and its about OMC of course-that sexsi beast! It was difficult because there has to be a certain amount of syllables in each line and there has to be fourteen lines, etc. - crazyness!

Love,
Yukino

[Prissy]

Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #77 on: March 26, 2006, 08:26:53 PM »
Greetings Fellow Poets!

     When they redid Claymaniacs, I couldn't find this forum at first and I was like "Omg! my poems, what's happened to them!" They're still here so it's all good-yaaaaay! =) In fact, I have two new ones! 

Love Poem

I want to pull you close to me
So close that there would be no space between us
And I could feel the warmth of your body
I want to hold you tight
But not too tight, in a tender way, I suppose
I want to kiss your lips, know their taste, and what they feel like
Above all, I want to tell you something
I want you to know that I love you
Truly, madly, deeply
I love you


Loving

Initially awkward yet tender kisses
Passionate kisses
Caressing, touching
Loving
Undone buttons
Clothes slide to the floor
Tangled up in each other
Loving
Cuddling under the covers
Loving


Comments: I love the first one, 'tis very sweet =) The second one is so-so, I dunno... tell me what y'all think-k?

Love,
Yukino

[Prissy]

   
Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #80 on: April 12, 2006, 01:12:23 PM »
Hey Guys!

     I have another poem for y'all-enjoi!   

Like a Couple in Love

I’m not quite certain whether it was the way he smiled at me
Or the way we flattered each other the whole time
But that night, I fell even harder for him
He seemed to have changed somehow, in a good way though
A picture of us was taken
Before he had to leave
We looked beautiful together
Like a couple in love


Comments: This one was inspired by the night I celebrated my 17th birthday; the guy I'm in love with came, so I attempted to capture my feelings=) It was so wonderful that I had a hard time doing so.

Love,
Yukino

[Prissy]

   
Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #82 on: May 13, 2006, 09:23:19 PM »
Thank you Prissy! Your praise always inspires me to write more poetry =) Yes, I would love to publish my works someday! Here's another poem everyone!

Let's

Let's squeeze each other a little tighter
Let's hold hands as we're strolling along
Let's Eskimo kiss
Until I get the hang of real kissing
How about one-on-one lessons?
Let's drive to the beach
Frolic in the sea
And have fish n' chips
Let's go to a movie
Let's get an ice cream afterwards
It doesn't matter to me
I just want to be around you
Let's fall in love

Comments: This one is about the same guy as "Like a Couple in Love" Ok, his name is Jonathan Pyo and I LOVE HIM! There, he's no longer "that guy I like" -lol! Anyway, it's not quite as pretty as my other poems, but its pretty cute =)

xoxoxo,
Yukino

[Prissy]

   
Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #86 on: June 18, 2006, 07:12:24 PM »
Thanks Prissy, that makes me feel much better =) I have another poem-yay!

Just You, Me, and Our Love

We were sitting on the grass
Just you and me
It seemed like there were no other humans in existence
No one else mattered
Nothing else mattered
We just sat in silence
For a few moments
Then you put your arm around me
And began to indirectly and nervously (in a cute way)
Tell me that you love me
I blushed as red as a ripe strawberry and said "I love you too"
But alas, it was only a wonderful dream

Comments: This one took me about 2 minutes to do- pretty awesome-eh? and it's for Jonathan Pyo (my future hubby-hee hee)

xoxoxo,
Yukino

[Prissy]

   
Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #90 on: June 30, 2006, 05:53:06 PM »
  I'm back so soon ... This is something I just wrote. Was sorta strange since I didn't think I had anything. Apparently I had a lot of "anything". 

Background: Yes, it's Clay in it  I figured at the end that it was really all on the cd release and all the thoughts and feeling I had towards what others have been saying that I didn't knew I held still... oh and to be sure on one thing, I'm not going anywhere

Lost
I don't want to come back

Imagine
Never do I want to
The thought of her with you

Losing
Losing you forever
She'll have you and their will be

No more
No more of what I love so
Forever lost deep down in places unknown

Love
What I once thought I knew

No longer
Not sure this is what I ever felt
If this is what I want
What I need

Pretending
Maybe this was a dream
Something I can forget about immediately
Wipe clear from my mind

Tomorrow
I may not be here
Here waiting no more
Like so many

Others
Others who left
Who quit
Who think about you no more
Who's had it and want to forget you
Who have no more faith in what you do
In what you say

In when you'll finally be back...
Back with us

Kimmy (claytonsmyccf)

[Prissy]

Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #91 on: July 04, 2006, 06:14:28 PM »
Nice work Claytonsmyccf =) New poem peoples!   

Writer’s Block

I’ve been trying to write
The perfect love poem for you
But the words won’t reach my lined paper
You’re sweet, intelligent, funny, quirky and so cute
Those are mere adjectives
Adjectives aren’t worthy of you my darling
I wish I could express how you make me feel
All I can manage is:
Me encanto tu, sa rang hae, I love you


Comments: This came to me when I was in the bathroom, believe or not-hee hee =) It's so-so, compared to my other work, but cute anyway and it's for Mr. Pyo   My love!

xoxoxo,
Yukino

[Prissy]

Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #93 on: July 11, 2006, 04:58:40 PM »
Hellooooo =)

   Same thing as last time, but in a different color, as requested.

Writer’s Block

I’ve been trying to write
The perfect love poem for you
But the words won’t reach my lined paper
You’re sweet, intelligent, funny, quirky and so cute
Those are mere adjectives
Adjectives aren’t worthy of you my darling
I wish I could express how you make me feel
All I can manage is:
Me encanto tu, sa rang hae, I love you


Comments: This came to me when I was in the bathroom, believe or not-hee hee =) It's so-so, compared to my other work, but cute anyway and it's for Mr. Pyo    My love! By the way, Sa rang hae and Me encanto tu mean "I love you," so the last line is "I love you, I love you, I love you."

xoxoxo,
Yukino

[Prissy]

   
Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #94 on: July 12, 2006, 03:00:48 PM »

New Poem! It's a bit...unique I guess you can say, but tell me what you guys think =) I need help thinking of a title as well. If any of you are Spongebob fans you'll understand it better-hee hee =)Thank you!

I long to see your smiling, brown-eyed face
You have the cutest grin I have ever seen
I long to stroke your soft, dark hair
Like I used to all the time
I really need one of your hugs by the way
They’re the best!
And I miss our cheesy conversations about Spongebob,
Living in a pineapple (or under a rock) in the sea
We could be neighbors
And go jellyfishing all the time,
Get a Krabby Patty later
Maybe go up to makeout reef
Wink wink

xoxoxo,
Yukino

[Prissy]

   
Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #98 on: July 28, 2006, 06:12:57 PM »
Thank you Lady C, you're the best =) I love the title! Sa rang hae means "I love you" in Korean and Me encanto tu means "I love you" in Spanish; I used Korean because it's Pyo's nationality and Spanish because we met in Spanish class =) Good thing I didn't take French! I have another poem, it's pretty cute...

“Hi”

My heart is beating sooo fast
Stay calm
I can do this
How does my hair look?
Guys don’t notice!
Do they?
Ok, enough about the hair
Stay calm
I look fine
Deep breath
In…Out…
He’s coming my way
Here’s my chance
“Hi”

xoxoxo,
Yukino
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[Prissy]

Re: The Poet's Corner
« Reply #100 on: August 21, 2006, 12:19:31 PM »
New poem-yay! It's about Pyo-again =) Unfortunately, we didn't really kiss...

Wow

We didn’t say anything
Because we didn’t have to
We just took in each other
For a few moments
And somehow knew what to do
Our lips seemed to touch on their own
I felt mine tingling
And wondered if you did too
I didn’t want to stop
When we did
All I could manage to say was
“Wow.”
All you could manage was a smile
That smile was even better than the kiss
Like waking up from a pleasant dream

xoxoxo,
Yukino